Not wonderful but...
This is not a piece of incredible animation with awesome graphics, it's not really bad anyway, the guy is nicely drawn, there's an effort on the background but i don't like this style, so... well anyway, what is cool is this morose atmosphere and the text appears slowly like in adventure games.
Although I don't really like the overall flash, I have to admit that I'm waiting for your next one. If you're going to do the next part this week, if you want me to be impressed or admiring, you should spend a lot of time on Flash ! :P
Good luck!